Chapter Ending Technique #1 in Speculative Fiction
What makes a reader compulsively turn the page? Often, it’s the chapter ending—the moment where tension peaks, an unexpected revelation drops, or something crucial is left unsaid. In genre fiction, especially science fiction, fantasy, and paranormal romance, cliffhanger endings can be the key to an unputdownable book.
Let’s break down how master storytellers from speculative fiction craft cliffhanger chapter endings, and how you can apply their techniques to your writing.
🧗♀️ What Is a Cliffhanger Chapter Ending?
A cliffhanger ending leaves a crucial question unanswered, a threat unresolved, or a shift in momentum that forces the reader to keep going. Unlike a standard chapter closure, cliffhangers refuse to offer resolution—they create suspense, ensuring that readers must turn the page.
In speculative fiction, these cliffhangers are often built on:
- ✅ A twist that reshapes the stakes
- ✅ Danger or tension that escalates abruptly
- ✅ An unanswered mystery that begs resolution
- ✅ An emotional bombshell that lingers
📚 Mastering the Cliffhanger: Examples from the Best
1. ⚔️ The “Sudden Peril” Cliffhanger
Jim Butcher – The
Dresden Files, Storm Front
Urban fantasy meets noir detective. Harry Dresden is Chicago’s only
wizard-for-hire, and trouble finds him faster than he can cast a shield spell.
Butcher is a master of dropping Dresden into danger at the end of a
chapter—whether it’s a surprise attack, a sinister discovery, or a magical
trap. The stakes skyrocket, and readers have to know what happens next.
💡 How to use this technique:
End your chapter with your protagonist facing an imminent threat—physical,
magical, or emotional. Force them into a moment of decision, but don’t reveal
their choice until the next chapter.
2. 🧠 The “Revelation Drop” Cliffhanger
Dan Simmons – Hyperion
Cantos
A pilgrimage across a war-torn galaxy, each traveler haunted by the Shrike—a
mysterious, deadly entity. Simmons uses layered storytelling, often ending
chapters with revelations that shift the reader’s understanding of the
characters or the universe. These aren’t just twists—they’re paradigm shifts.
💡 How to use this technique:
End a chapter by revealing a new truth that contradicts or deepens the reader’s
understanding of the story. Drop a major piece of information, but don’t fully
explain it until the next chapter.
3. 💔 The “Emotional Gut Punch” Cliffhanger
J.R. Ward – The
Black Dagger Brotherhood
Vampires, vengeance, and emotional wreckage. Ward’s chapter endings lean into
high-stakes romance and raw vulnerability. Whether it’s a confession, a
betrayal, or a moment of unbearable longing, she leaves readers emotionally
compromised and desperate for resolution.
💡 How to use this technique:
Instead of ending your chapter with action, end with a character’s emotions
hitting their peak—love, grief, anger, regret. Don’t offer resolution. Let
readers sit in that uncertainty.
4. 🕯️ The “Mysterious Lure” Cliffhanger
Joel Abernathy – Flesh
and Bone
A gritty paranormal romance with survival, trauma, and supernatural tension.
Abernathy’s endings often leave questions hanging—subtle, character-driven, and
emotionally charged. Readers aren’t just curious—they’re compelled.
💡 How to use this technique:
Close your chapter with a question left unanswered. Let the reader wonder what
the character will do next or hint at something bigger brewing—without giving
the full picture.
5. 🌀 The “Shift in Reality” Cliffhanger
Greg Egan – Permutation
City
Digital consciousness, simulated worlds, and philosophical chaos. Egan’s
endings often pivot into existential territory—where reality itself is
questioned. Just when you think you understand the rules, he changes them.
💡 How to use this technique:
End a chapter with a moment of existential realization—your character sees
something they cannot unsee, and the narrative is altered forever.
✍️ Final Tips for Writing Cliffhanger Chapter Endings
To craft compelling chapter endings that force the reader to keep going, try these strategies:
- ✅ Cut away at the peak of tension—don’t allow resolution yet
- ✅ Drop critical information, but don’t explain it fully
- ✅ Leave emotional moments raw, unresolved, or filled with uncertainty
- ✅ Push the stakes higher—what’s the worst thing that could happen?
Every time a reader wonders what happens next, you’ve succeeded in crafting a cliffhanger that works.
📚 This is Part Two of a seven-part
series on chapter endings.
Next up: The Revelation, with examples featuring Dan Simmons (Hyperion
Cantos) and N.K. Jemisin (The Fifth Season).
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